Exodus (Approved.)

Name : Exodus law

Age : 18

Character : Team Rocket

Looks : http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/m03/d03/18/333536.png

Originally from : Sandgem Town

personality:
-arrogant
-argumentative
+confident
+tactically minded

Starting Pokemon :
Gengar
arcanine
Alakazam
Typhlosion
tyranitar (if not then houndoom)
Dragonite

history:
originally from palet town been on a mission too be like his idle ash brownsauce, he has traveled trough all the main town and noticed there was no trainers there so has headed across the waters too the new islands, with new trainers, new monsters, new gym leaders. while traveling across the water he went into a strange fog which sent everyone crazy, he ended up knocking the crewe out on the ship and now his story is set too be layed out on this new island!

in the history change the slaughtering

and for a starting trainer i think u can't have celebi.

Yes, change the slaughtering. This isn't Naruto. And write better. Check your grammer. PERIODS!

And Yes, you can't have Celebi.

ok redone

killing is the same thing is slaughtering, NO KILLING!

Well as Dawn already said use these buttons (,) (.) ( (...) in the history it kind of breath-killing to read it all. Also agrees with Andross's Last Post.

ergh ok changed it all

ah? another TR, cool. I kno its probley not recommended so ill just ask you rather then suggest but can you make a new character picture because yours looks nothing like somthing from pokemon .... Your profile is somewhat like mine 2

* Kiss Me Im English! *

Dawn it seems ok. just choose though between tyranitar and houndoom i think you can have either one of them.

Okay, it looks good to me. But just to let you know, there will be no more boy TRs. We need a girl in there too.