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Post by Exodus on Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:37 pm

Name : Exodus law

Age : 18

Character : Team Rocket

Looks : http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/m03/d03/18/333536.png

Originally from : Sandgem Town

personality:
-arrogant
-argumentative
+confident
+tactically minded

Starting Pokemon :
Gengar
arcanine
Alakazam
Typhlosion
tyranitar (if not then houndoom)
Dragonite

history:
originally from palet town been on a mission too be like his idle ash brownsauce, he has traveled trough all the main town and noticed there was no trainers there so has headed across the waters too the new islands, with new trainers, new monsters, new gym leaders. while traveling across the water he went into a strange fog which sent everyone crazy, he ended up knocking the crewe out on the ship and now his story is set too be layed out on this new island!


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Post by kisa on Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:40 pm

in the history change the slaughtering

and for a starting trainer i think u can't have celebi.

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Post by Dawn on Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:42 pm

Yes, change the slaughtering. This isn't Naruto. And write better. Check your grammer. PERIODS!

And Yes, you can't have Celebi.
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Post by Exodus on Sat Mar 08, 2008 6:47 pm

ok redone
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Post by Andross on Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:11 pm

killing is the same thing is slaughtering, NO KILLING!

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Post by c3l3bi on Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:43 am

Well as Dawn already said use these buttons (,) (.) (Smile (...) in the history it kind of breath-killing to read it all. Also agrees with Andross's Last Post.
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Post by Exodus on Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:06 am

ergh ok changed it all
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Post by Brad on Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:09 am

ah? another TR, cool. I kno its probley not recommended so ill just ask you rather then suggest but can you make a new character picture because yours looks nothing like somthing from pokemon lol!.... Your profile is somewhat like mine 2 Very Happy

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Post by c3l3bi on Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:41 am

Dawn it seems ok. just choose though between tyranitar and houndoom i think you can have either one of them.

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Post by Dawn on Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:08 pm

Okay, it looks good to me. But just to let you know, there will be no more boy TRs. We need a girl in there too.
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