Waiting for a Challenge

Jaden had reached Sandgem Town. He was bored, and he heard that there were some good trainers hanging around Sandgem Town, so he went there, hoping to get some battling in. He was really excited at the prospect of a real challenge.

(You need to make it a more roleplay kind of thing. Like:

Jaden had finally reached Sangem Town. He had heard that powerful trainers had come here to visit to challenge younger trainers. But he didn't see any around. Jaden finally decided to head towards the Pokemon Center to talk to cutie Nurse Joy.)

((Okay, I edited it.))

"Whats the big commotion?"

Jaden turned around. "Oh swell, another trainer," he said happily. "Hey, let's battle!"

"Okay but go easy on me."*gets 1 pokeball*"Buizel I choose you!"*Buizel comes*"Bui,bui"(Italics are pokemon noises)

"Sweet. Jolteon, spark it UP!" Jaden said, throwing Jolteon's Poke Ball. "Jolt, Jolt!" "Alright Jolteon, get 'em!" Jolteon used Thunderbolt.

"Buizel use agility to dodge then follow it up with tackle"*buizel dodged and started charging at Jolteon with a quick tackle*

"Jolteon...let's give 'em something they can't dodge: Shock Wave!" Jaden said calmly. Jolteon hit Buizel with Shock Wave.

Buiiii"Are u Ok buizel!!"*Buizel nods*"use agility and then use water gun*

"Jolteon, one last time, I need you to let a Shock Wave roll!" said Jaden, who was enjoying himself. Jolteon then gave Buizel another dose of Shock Wave.

((What about the water gun I threw at you.))
*Buizel gets hit*"Buizel jump high in the air and follow up with a tackle"*Buizel did as he was told*

((Shock Wave would've cancelled it out. It's stronger then Water Gun. And you gotta say Buizel was hit, because Shock Wave is undodgeable. XD)) "Jolt, give 'em another Shock Wave..." Jaden said. Jolteon immediately used Shock Wave.

"Buizel Return"*Takes out the pokeball and he Buizel comes back*"cant risk Buizel getting more hurt"

"Right...so you only have one Pokemon?" Jaden asked. "By the way...my name's Uzumaki Jaden. What's yours?"

"Kisaku Inuyishi.Nice to meet you.Yes I do""*wind blows.Kisaku's hair flows.then he puts it back behind his ears*"Well I better get going"

"Wait, Kisaku, want me to help you find a few more Pokemon?" Jaden asked. He felt a little sorry for Kisaku, who was obviously new to adventure, and he liked to help out the beginners.

*He smiled*"Sure.How about we go on a journey together?It will be loads of fun."

"Yeah, let's," said Jaden. "I'm alone except for my team, and besides...more safety in numbers." Jaden looked around. "Hey, look, it's a Plusle! And he looks pretty strong, almost as strong as my Minus," Jaden said, looking at the wild Plusle.

*Kisaku blushed*"We still need to go back to get my badges."*rubs the back of his head*"Sorry"

"Oh here, I have some Super Potions that'll clear those wounds up," said Jaden. He handed Kisaku a few Super Potions, plus five Ultra Balls. "These Ultra Balls are far more effective then the standard Poke Ball," Jaden explained. "They make for easy catching."

*Takes them from Jaden*"Thank You so I guess we should get started"

[Jaden did you buy those items you gave him? if no you cant give him sorry. The pokeMart is there for a reason]

((Okay, hold on...)) "Yep," said Jaden. The Plusle was still standing there, along with another Plusle. Jaden threw Arcanine's Ultra Ball, and he popped out. "Flamethrower them Plusles, Arcanine," said Jaden. Arcanine did so. Jaden threw an Ultra Ball at the first Plusle. It shook a couple times, then it flashed red and Jaden picked it up. He put it in his backpack. "You can have the other one, if you want."

"No thank you I will catch my own when the time comes."*Kisaku and Jaden start walking*((g2g))